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Competition Entry by jesuszg (Member)

Submitted: June 16, 2009

Homie i can crush a fuckin tower with the rhymes that i write
coming out my mind and mouth or from a pencil in my hand
im trying to run away from death about to set another trap
that has me fighting once again but peace is all i want to have
my body's temperature turns cold, without a knife i slit your throat
so now im writing with no soul the bottle got me tripping more
this trick is old,
to write down my thoughts and let them go
i see the stars in my mind homie i dont need a telescope
I'm living life in the same cycle times old
now I'm turning to the lord but i guess he thinks I'm psyco
Relapse on the act, famous fountain on the back
update all the facts and build a sculpture when i die


Competition Entry by T.D.B (Member)

Submitted: June 16, 2009

im lettin haters know T.D.B gonna b here 4 a while
flow harder than marble tile more than a home run hitter im always gettin cycles so im sealin ya fate u got dat firefox flow always needin updates yall gotta know da kid dope fast forward flow like i got a time telescope so me vs u u gotta get beat like hulk i crush wether you solo or in a packed bus get me yeah im that bad yall just that mad so my style you gonna follow then i switch it up like da designs on the pepsi bottle my crew pick careers apart we rap vultures when we rhymes its stone hard like davinci sculptures so i suggest you get a game plan and a couple exta men cause im always flowin like a broke water fountain dnt even gotta try to get at cha if ya sweat easy dnt read this cause i spit heat and im raising the temperature we sorta like NAS crew yea we the brave ones spitting extra hard till my whole city gettin recognition and famous if you ever been a addict i suggest you get back cause i spit crack and every bar will make you relapse


Competition Entry by LARRY WILSON (Guest)

Submitted: June 15, 2009

TAKING A LOOK THROUGH THE TELESCOPE MAGNIFIES THE LIGHT.

BOTTLE THE STARS IN THE SKY, SO I CAN SEE THROUGH THE NIGHT.

SCULPTURE THE EARTH IN GODS IMAGE, DRINK FROM THE FOUNTAIN OF LIFE, TO RELAPSE IN, LIKE A LESSON, A HIDDEN BLESSING IN SPITE.

CYCLE YOUR ENERGY TOWARDS POSITIVE THINKING DESPITE, WHAT THE CRITICS SAY, MAKE SURE YOU KEEP YOUR DREAMS IN YOUR SIGHT.

CRUSH ALL OF THE NEGATIVE THOUGHTS, THEN TURN THE TEMPERATURE TO HOT, BEFORE YOU KNOW IT YOU'LL BE FAMOUS. UPDATE ME WHEN YOU GET TO THE TOP.

P.S I'LL SEE YOU AT THE TOP.




LARRY WILSON
317-679-1600
ELITESERVICES317@HOTMAIL.COM


Competition Entry by MaZz MoSiS (Guest)

Submitted: June 13, 2009

in famous mugg shotz blasting on the seen futuristaic war battles crush all who remain red stains cover broken
sculpture peaces as shots rain from the sky update
to creation as hell burns souls hotter than the
temperature of cremation fountaion of ashes
strikewit telescope shots from a nuclear
space station controled bye a mad
sciencetist with coke bottle
glasses with a foreign CHARLESTON
axcent causin a cycle SC
to relapse life MAZZMOSIS@YAHOO.COM


Competition Entry by Justin aka Myth (Member)

Submitted: June 10, 2009

Even though im famous i choose to remain nameless
trin to be like two pac to the game and make some changes
derrangest the strangest m.c from the prehistoric ages
commin back with vengeance and a bottle
paper bag your moms head and pretend shes a model
pedal to the metal im livin life full throttle
im money over bitches that's my quote and my motto
but now for a clean slate , a quick update
rap is my fate my wife and my mate
so ima put in my two cents before its to late
and before im to broke to put food on the plate
i make these girls salivate like they got a crush
when i tell um i wanna f**k yo i make um blush
i give um multiple orgasms with a single touch
cuz i take my time i dont like to rush
just checked out of rehab so now its time to relapse
take three caps of ex and see how long ill last





Competition Entry by 1/2 cut 1/2 lit (Member)

Submitted: June 10, 2009

step to me you aint yourself cause my lyrics is so sick/
make you drop the mike and piss while your suckin your own dick/
this is da pros kid dont bother us vets/
my flows stretch like the wedgies over a fat dudes head/
thermometers explode when i flow like iron the mic so hot it glows/
dont need to check your temperature motherfucker you froze/
like a sculpture/ us vultures perched on the culture/
ive ate so many bad mc's/ ive got ulcers/
demographics/ where my from? im from the pen and paper/
nameless /not like the ones who just wanna be famous/
bench press the mic so phat it needs lypo/
my style so dirty the tracks on spin cycle/
hiphops laundry mat we only bring the dirties/
liqour in my fountain cup/ when im thirsty/
I'm a zombie to most in this concrete zoo they knew/
i'd relapse and wake up with the brown bottle flu/
no voice of reason freezin in my alcoholic freedom/
mcs either need balls or need a telescope to see'em/
so update your thesaurus/ your lifestyles fuckin borin'/
dont be crushed when the silence is broke by the snorin'/


Competition Entry by Kazper1983 (Member)

Submitted: June 9, 2009

Take a look thur your telescope,
and you might see me hanging from a rope.
As I began to relapse,
my usual cycle, you can relax.
I crush pills and empty bottles,
Then headaches and mood swings is what follows.
I'm famous for overdosing,
this is my show and i'm hosting.
"NURSE WE NEED AN UPDATED! WHAT'S HIS TEMPERATURE?!
SOMEBODY BRING HIM A CUP AND A WATER PITCHER!!"
I'm in a pretty place now with sculptures and fountains.
Surrround by endless skies and endless mountains.


Competition Entry by The Real Don P (Guest)

Submitted: June 9, 2009

Breaking news heres an update Don P's gonna relapse!
He gonna crush a bottle a pills and one a sweet schnapps
sniff coke thru a telescope and xanex just to relax
this is nothing new its just the cycyle he will be back
this is the aimless life of a shameless man thats famous
its uncomfortable to some like takin temperature in anus
my flow is art like a fountain sculputre painting frame this
Already ate up all the words and i aint even fuckin say shit.


Competition Entry by zodapoet (Member)

Submitted: June 8, 2009

i crush bottles on famous sculptures and fountains
with my telescope i flee to the mountains.
i smoke tree's i get clean then i relapse
im like chicago's temperature aint no telling where i'll be at
i react
cause life is just cycle
a simple man like me focuses only on survival
my rivals there all looking for a update
but i aint checking in so i guess they'll all be up late


Competition Entry by Spinna (Member)

Submitted: June 7, 2009

If yall never knew me before, my name is spinna, and here is an update
I make other rappers sore, when they here my words, all of them drop, faint
but wait, Im so famous, I'm a sculpture of brilliance, my light irritates they eyes when they up late
I bottle yall up like soda, yall cant eat my ish, or drink from my fountain, you better get a paper cup, plate
I cant lie when I say Im hot, even in a relapse, I make the temperature desapate
I crush lil dudes quick, ready for the next round, or cycle, dont matter I'm a heavyweight
but Im not too heavy to run, jog, sprint, or carry a slightly quickened Pace
like the hotsauce, I burn yall out my way, you better reach for the telescope, cause your vision's looking opaque



Competition Entry by Hero (Romania) (Guest)

Submitted: June 7, 2009

I crush on the ground so drunck and so high
After 200 grams of weed and 1 bottle of divine wine
I'm in a coma , but I will cycle in my submarine in the past
But look at my , the doctors wacke me up and they say "RELAPSE!!!!"
I'm famous to the dealers in town for how many drugs I take
Cuz im like Nd32 sistem , on trial , I need to update
Doctors look in my head with a fuckin' telescope "oh no doctor!!!!
Im not high i just got high temperature
Please dont look at my like a sculpure , im not dead
I will piss on yo like a fountain to make you understand!!!"


Competition Entry by tremor45 (Member)

Submitted: June 3, 2009

Your girl know me she know Im famous
I take all your chips the full house like John Stamos
Im makin her blush river like the royal flush
If you tryin to get with her I make your head crush
You a swagger stealin scavenger somethin like a vulture
My rhymes are an art like a Michelangelo sculpture
That hard white rock go through the whole cycle
You say you real? thats bull like Michael
My rhymes is hot but im cool like a fountain
i keep the snow the temperature of a mountain
Im out of this world, get your telescope
Check me flyin with Obi-Wan Im raps last hope!
You havin problems with the tech, you meetin your fate
I solve hardware problems like a new update
I Crack a Bottle like Eminem when i go through Relapse
and Im gonna keep it real Til I Collapse!


Competition Entry by lefaraky (Member)

Submitted: June 3, 2009

Crush!!oh man
a bottle just dropped.
the temperature is low
coz i'm out on ma telescope
viewing a star that looks like ma sculpture
oh!i think of when i was famous
i don't wanna go back
a relapse?no
i don't want it to be a cycle
like a fountain
which needs no update
yeah that's a rare fact for ya all!


Voting Poll

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Words and Closing Date

Words

fireworks, guitar, ink, messenger, spade, boxing, midget, ostrich, hamburger, gorilla

Closing Date

March 9, 2014

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